all my fav poems stitched together (this was fun to make)

all my fav poems stitched together (this was fun to make)

Postby grey helm » 29 Dec 2004, 19:34

All the world in one asscent.
reaching zenith panoramic in deeds of st. or martyrhood.
My crystal faces all the broken traces fixed and here all as one.

phase ONE.
all teeth on offer in price of a rose one hundred feet taller than he was before, the holes in her hand act as the retina of forseeing
Dictate to her the gravel she waits, Is there nothing more you can show today? she waits.
trapped between the frame she cant withdraw I listen for the footsteps,
My four walls here love me dearly though with great haste, delusion becomes a palace to me.
old stains with the images of a night spent from the head Universal equilibrium charades, for, under the anthill deep in thought Omega one hundred screams SHE CRIED AND CRIED the bell doom ringer stung his hand on bunrt rope.
with hands outstretched i fell a thousnad hours,
each arm as strong as the next dwells beanth the throne of king number 32. where the thistle hopes of all will start again untill prefection.
There she will sit for a thousand years undiying and ready waiting for her sun of a thousand words to cherish her children again.

she speaks. whispers flutters insomniac dreams her she utters

upon the mount there, she whispers,
lies the secret child of the moonlit sisters.
glory spills from skull and bone
so take your secrets and build a throne.
i am but night and moon and star,
you are their sun and fade afair
twin dragons shall obey your silent tounge
throughout the battles both lost and won"

dreams where made by kings and queens just to know i'm underground
the lession i commit to teach to those who here the sacred speach"

ive decended not forgotton the past

All the world in one asscent.
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Postby Azrienoch » 30 Dec 2004, 03:11

Hey man, good to hear from you!
This is interesting. Tell me, are any of these the full poems? How did you decide (aside from them being your favorites) that these poems should fit together?
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Postby Kat Lady » 30 Dec 2004, 03:33

I can say beyond a doubt that I enjoy them as you have pieced them together. You must have had some real fun doing this, seeing how they all fit into the puzzle.
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Postby grey helm » 30 Dec 2004, 17:16

Well the verse,

upon the mount there, she whispers,
lies the secret child of the moonlit sisters.
glory spills from skull and bone
so take your secrets and build a throne.
i am but night and moon and star,
you are their sun and fade afair
twin dragons shall obey your silent tounge
throughout the battles both lost and won

this was the main rhyming scheme from the first ever poem i posted i wanted all of that in becuase i think it is possibly the best or most emotive piece of writing i have ever writtion. Its nice to hear from you to Azrienoch its been a while since weve spoken (hope youve had a nice xmas even though youve been working sooo hard hope things are okey). Well i decided id like to reivaluate alot of what ive said for me this was a contemplation and possibly the best poem i could create, various eras meet one feeling it was funny to see how my style is very repetative all of the poems seem to fit as if they are all one anyway!
anyway im glad you like.
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